From 5643e00cce32def42babc07f7ef9456939b931b3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: David Runge Date: Sat, 8 Jul 2017 17:25:40 +0200 Subject: thesis/thesis.tex: Minor fixes below Discussion. --- thesis/thesis.tex | 20 ++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/thesis/thesis.tex b/thesis/thesis.tex index de8888c..870d6d2 100644 --- a/thesis/thesis.tex +++ b/thesis/thesis.tex @@ -1681,8 +1681,8 @@ ssr-aap -N “server” -C “127.0.0.1:50002” further in the following section, followed by an outlook on related future work.\\ Due to the versatility of how the \gls{ssr} can be used in a networking - context, its likely, that some of its possibilities are not even accounted - for. + context, it is likely, that some of its possibilities are not even + accounted for. \subsection{Implemented Features} \label{subsec:implemented_features} @@ -1697,9 +1697,9 @@ ssr-aap -N “server” -C “127.0.0.1:50002” described in~\ref{subsec:publisher_subscriber_interface} and extends it, where appropriate. Additionally an open client-server architecture has been created, according to a message level system, further elaborated - upon in \gls{subsubsec:message_levels}. An attempt at giving extensive - examples on the various setup possibilities, that are now possible, is - made in \gls{subsubsec:setups}, some of which are still dependant on + upon in~\ref{subsubsec:message_levels}. An attempt at giving extensive + examples on the various setup possibilities, that are now available, is + made in~\ref{subsubsec:setups}, some of which are still dependant on various missing features (see~\ref{subsec:future_work}).\\ The \gls{osc} messaging system is adhering to the aforementioned client-server architecture by distinguishing between client-only, @@ -1832,7 +1832,7 @@ ssr-aap -N “server” -C “127.0.0.1:50002” \gls{osc} interface trying to create a possibly defective address and send poll messages out to it.\\ While only some of the above mentioned scenarios could lead to a crash - of the program (under certain circumstances), unhandled all of them + of the program under certain circumstances, left unhandled, all of them waste ressources, which is undesired. To circumvent possibly harmful input using the \gls{osc} interface, a set of sanity checks were implemented, that only allow for a received @@ -1872,10 +1872,10 @@ ssr-aap -N “server” -C “127.0.0.1:50002” \subsection{Future Work} \label{subsec:future_work} - Several features, interesting for different use-cases, could not be - implemented in the time frame set for this work. They are however - complementary to the \gls{osc} networking extension, or can be - implemented on top of it.\\ + Several features, interesting for different use-cases, were out of scope + for this work. They are however complementary to the \gls{osc} networking + extension, or can be implemented on top of it and will be discussed in + the following sections.\\ \subsubsection{Non-renderer} \label{subsubsec:non-renderer} -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf