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   creating desktop applications.}
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 \AtBeginDocument{\hypersetup{pdftitle = {A Networking Extension for the
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   David Runge
   \newpage
 
-  \renewcommand{\abstractname}{Zusammenfassung}
-  \begin{abstract}
-  \end{abstract}
-  \newpage
-
-  \renewcommand{\abstractname}{Abstract}
   \begin{abstract}
     In the field of spatial audio reproduction different types of software have
     been designed to cope with the needs of several rendering algorithms
@@ -206,23 +198,31 @@ parskip=never]{paper}
     that attends to the needs of a specific setup in place. Unfortunately, to
     some of these solutions, no further work is applied, leaving them
     unsupported at some point in time.\\
-    Therefore, in the following work, past and current free and open-source
+    Therefore, in the following work, a set of current free and open-source
     spatial audio renderers, actively used in scientific and artistic contexts,
-    are evaluated. The SoundScape Renderer --- in contrast to the other
-    candidates, a multi-purpose tool --- is chosen for a rewrite of its network
-    based messaging system, which then allows it to be used in large scale
-    multi-loudspeaker setups and networked singular setups, all rendering the
+    is evaluated for usability, applicability and context: sWONDER, HoaLibrary
+    (for PureData), 3Dj (for SuperCollider), WFSCollider and the SoundScape
+    Renderer. The latter --- in contrast to the other candidates, a
+    multi-purpose tool --- is chosen for a rewrite of its network based
+    messaging system. Its new functionality then allows it to be used in large
+    scale multi-loudspeaker setups, in which several instances work
+    collectively and networked individual setups alike, while rendering the
     same virtual audio scene.\\
-    Its new networking extension, along with a client-server architecture, its
-    messaging system with tests and workflow examples is elaborated. New setup
-    possibilities are contrasted with the automation available through the
-    network interface currently in use.\\
+    The SoundScape Renderer's new networking extension, along with a
+    client-server architecture, its messaging system with tests and workflow
+    examples is elaborated. New setup possibilities are contrasted with the
+    automation available through the network interface currently in use.\\
     Closing, an outlook on future work with the help of the new networking
     extension and general improvement suggestions for the SoundScape Renderer
     are discussed.
   \end{abstract}
   \newpage
 
+  \renewcommand{\abstractname}{Zusammenfassung}
+  \begin{abstract}
+  \end{abstract}
+  \newpage
+
   \section*{Acknowlegdements}
   \newpage