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further in the following section, followed by an outlook on related
future work.\\
Due to the versatility of how the \gls{ssr} can be used in a networking
- context, its likely, that some of its possibilities are not even accounted
- for.
+ context, it is likely, that some of its possibilities are not even
+ accounted for.
\subsection{Implemented Features}
\label{subsec:implemented_features}
@@ -1697,9 +1697,9 @@ ssr-aap -N “server” -C “127.0.0.1:50002”
described in~\ref{subsec:publisher_subscriber_interface} and extends it,
where appropriate. Additionally an open client-server architecture has
been created, according to a message level system, further elaborated
- upon in \gls{subsubsec:message_levels}. An attempt at giving extensive
- examples on the various setup possibilities, that are now possible, is
- made in \gls{subsubsec:setups}, some of which are still dependant on
+ upon in~\ref{subsubsec:message_levels}. An attempt at giving extensive
+ examples on the various setup possibilities, that are now available, is
+ made in~\ref{subsubsec:setups}, some of which are still dependant on
various missing features (see~\ref{subsec:future_work}).\\
The \gls{osc} messaging system is adhering to the aforementioned
client-server architecture by distinguishing between client-only,
@@ -1832,7 +1832,7 @@ ssr-aap -N “server” -C “127.0.0.1:50002”
\gls{osc} interface trying to create a possibly defective address and
send poll messages out to it.\\
While only some of the above mentioned scenarios could lead to a crash
- of the program (under certain circumstances), unhandled all of them
+ of the program under certain circumstances, left unhandled, all of them
waste ressources, which is undesired.
To circumvent possibly harmful input using the \gls{osc} interface, a
set of sanity checks were implemented, that only allow for a received
@@ -1872,10 +1872,10 @@ ssr-aap -N “server” -C “127.0.0.1:50002”
\subsection{Future Work}
\label{subsec:future_work}
- Several features, interesting for different use-cases, could not be
- implemented in the time frame set for this work. They are however
- complementary to the \gls{osc} networking extension, or can be
- implemented on top of it.\\
+ Several features, interesting for different use-cases, were out of scope
+ for this work. They are however complementary to the \gls{osc} networking
+ extension, or can be implemented on top of it and will be discussed in
+ the following sections.\\
\subsubsection{Non-renderer}
\label{subsubsec:non-renderer}